Question

Hey Professor,

Heres my final version of the paper that we got to do for class. I hope you like it. I pulled an allnighter to get this in on time. Zzzz : (
Give me a shout if ya think I should change anything. But dude, IMHO I gotta say that this one is off the hinges!!!
Later,
Your favorite student ;)
Why is this message ‘poor’ or ineffective?

Answer 1

This message is ‘poor’ because it’s lacks manners and morals. First of all, it is inappropriate to call your professor “dude”.
The student stating that he pulled and all-nighter does not interest the professor, it was s the student’s responsibility to complete the assignment on time. The message is unprofessional and completely inappropriate.