Question

What is the attention Grabber for this essay? How Could it be improved

I believe in the truth setting you free. When I was young I used to have no qualms with telling a lie to suit my purposes, whether my purposes were to get out of trouble, getting what I wanted, or to make myself look good. As I grew older and experienced more of life, I became swayed from the dark side to believe in the value of truth. I believe that lying builds you your own prison cell brick by brick, with each lie building on top of the other. As the esteemed Fox Mulder said, “The truth is out there.” I believe in finding the truth in yourself and everything around you.

Answer 1

The attention grabber is the truth

Step-by-step explanation:

Every single sentence gives you a reason to say the truth against all odds. it tells what lying does to you and what truth makes you feel