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Hi can somebody I wrote paragraph but I need to fix it

Why do people get married?
I wrote four cause please I want send to the teacher today

Hi can somebody I wrote paragraph but I need to fix it Why do people get married? I-example-1
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First "reason" should be plural, don't forget to add proper punctuation and don't forget to capitalize but your evidence is good and your structure needs tobe in a essay format.

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