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Could anyone please help with an english sizzling start.

its about a boy named Jem who is sweeping a chimney, its dirty and muggy in there and hes in rough clothes.
was wondering if anyone could pleassssee write a few sentences/sizzling start about this for me because i really suck at writing.

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every square inch around me was brick, the smoke so thick I could write words in it. My worn clothes began to stick to my skin, covered in sweat. I'm careful not to rub my face to much as I do not want to be frowned upon due to my dirt smeared body.

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