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"Speaking first to the teacher and then to the principal, my mother asked her why my grades had declined so rapidly."

Which change to the sentence would help clarify things for the reader?
A) Changing "her" to "them."
B) Changing "first" to "firstly."
C) Changing "then" to "secondly."
D) Changing "rapidly" to "rapid."

User Gaurab Kc
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The answer would be A changing “her” to “them”
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A) Changing "her" to "them."

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