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Fred ordered a hamburger and soda for lunch.

He requested extra pickles for his hamburger.

What is the BEST way to combine the two sentences?
A) Fred ordered a hamburger with extra pickles and soda for lunch.
B) For lunch, Fred requested extra pickles on his hamburger and soda.
C) Fred ordered a hamburger, which had extra pickles, and soda for lunch.
D) Requesting extra pickles on his hamburger, Fred ordered a soda for lunch.

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I would have to say c- when you combine two sentences the correct way is to insert it using commas or semicolons. Inserting it between the two commas is the best way grammatically.
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A. the rest are either run off sentences, or just completely improper with a lot of unnecessary conjunctions
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