Question

You have been assigned to compose an informational essay about the Battle of Gettysburg. Which statement would NOT be

appropriate to use?
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At the Battle of Gettysburg, more than 50,000 men died.
Our stay at the Gettyburg Memorial Park was quite memorable.
The Battle of Gettysburg was the bloodiest of all American Civil War
battles.
After the legendary battle was over, President Lincoln commemorated the
war dead in his Gettysburg Address.

Answer 1

Our stay at the Gettyburg Memorial Park was quite memorable.

Step-by-step explanation:

If you're writing an information essay, it's best to keep biased information out. This sentence expresses your opinion that the Memorial Park was memorable, however, it may not be to others. This could be changed by including that there was a park built in memoriam of the war.