Question

What do you think about my poem?

12/14/2021

Its was a rainy day, but had a little heys.
People were not saying ok and they
Thought they don't even needed to
Say ok. Ok was a fine word that
Was not a a rude word.Its been
Used as the word ok.

The days went by and they said ok,
People said did they even know what is ok?
Well its cold and its okay not ok but still
Learning Ok?


100 days went by is that ok? The question is right
Are you telling me its not ok?Its a fancy word to say the word ok
This poems makes no sense even though its ok but the word
I use its just ok!

Answer 1

I like the first sentence, and I understand this is a poem but I kinda lost interest because of how many times you used the work "ok". I would reccommend searching for alternatives or maybe focus on a word that sounds similar to "ok".

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hope this helps :)