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Part 2. May someone review my grammar to see if it’s good, I’ll be so happy, thank you! :)

Part 2. May someone review my grammar to see if it’s good, I’ll be so happy, thank-example-1

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I agree with the top answer other than that it’s good
User Yuriy Anisimov
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Maybe say I can also go to the store instead
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