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Which of these best describes how to reduce wordiness in this sentence??

Which of these best describes how to reduce wordiness in this sentence??-example-1
User Longwen Ou
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The first one because the sentence has no need to know about when it was after New Years because you start your new year resolution after the New Years
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I’d choose the last one but it may not be correct.

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