Question

Maria excels in gymnastics and tumbling. She has the commitment and dedication it takes to be successful in a demanding sport. The balance beam is my favorite event to watch because it requires a great deal of focus. Maria will continue training in the hopes of landing a spot on the competitive team. Which best explains the inconsistency in writing used in this paragraph

Answer 1

It does not maintain the same tone throughout.

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Answer 2

One consistency in the text is "The balance beam is my favorite event to watch because it requires a great deal of focus."

Step-by-step explanation:

The line "The balance beam is my favorite event to watch because it requires a great deal of focus." is inconsistent with the text because the story suddenly changes from 3rd person to 1st person. When writing a story about something, you shouldn't abruptly mention your opinion/belief on something, even if it's related to the story.