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This is probably easy sorry

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Correct my sentences

1. the king didn’t want Robin Hood to be a hero he was a thief

2. robin hood stole from the rich king and gave to the poor he outsmarted the kings men every time

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I would put a transition word like ‘since’ or ‘because’ in the first sentence.
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1) The king didn’t want Robin Hood to be a hero, he was a thief.
2) Robin Hood stole from the rich king, and gave to the poor he outsmarted the kings men every time.
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