Final answer:
The best revision is the one that corrects capitalization, spelling, and grammatical errors, while maintaining the content and making the sentence concise.
Step-by-step explanation:
The most effective revision of the sentence in question is: My favorite holiday is Thanksgiving. I love being with my family, enjoying a great feast, and watching football together. Also, there is no pressure to exchange gifts with anyone. This revision corrects initial capitalization errors by only capitalizing the word 'Thanksgiving' as it is the name of a holiday. It also removes excess words to create a more concise and direct statement. The use of lower case 'f' in 'football' adheres to standard conventions as it is not a proper noun in this context. Additionally, the phrase 'toogether and theres no pressure' is corrected to 'together. Also, there is no pressure' to improve readability and correct spelling and grammatical errors. The revision creates clear and well-structured sentences.