Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative?
Now Kelly keeps her paint set high on a shelf in the closet. Jeremy had gotten paint everywhere - even on the ceiling! Kelly normally gets
along great with her little brother, Jeremy. She loves to draw and paint, and Jeremy loves trying to help out. One day, when Kelly was playing outside, Jeremy helped himself to her paint set.
A. Including a conflict or problem
B. Giving specific details about the paint set
C. Introducing the main characters
D. Narrating the events in chronological order