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what do y'all think of my first song lyrics (plz don't mean and some words might be messing bc it's 4:00 am and I'm very tired) and if y'all have any advice on making the lyrics better plz tell me have a nice night or day :)​

what do y'all think of my first song lyrics (plz don't mean and some words might be-example-1
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not a bad ine it's really nice try harder

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