It looks ok… 4/10.
To improve, first make a gray outline of your drawings of your character ( Like a sketch)
Then make a smoother black outline drawing ( Try to avoid making repeated sketches [I know it’s hard without adobe to help you label onion skin]).
Another tip is to make blocky vague shapes to show what type of appearance you want out of your character ( Proud: Upside equilateral triangle with a circle on top, Big: rectangle as the torso) afterward outlay your character drawing on the shapes. You can kinda think of this as a barrier for your drawings.
Tips for hands: This is har so if you want a really specific way for you to draw hands, look at your own hands first: Take a photo of the angle you want the viewer to perceived the character as, then make ( like I said for the second tip) vagues shapes then proceed to add more details on it to at least capture the imagery of how the hand should look like
My tips may sound bad looking at it but the best way is to just look at tutorials of how you can improve.
And I do know this is a budgeted drawing so basically try to do vague shapes before doing what I said about sketches.
Tips from commented:
o best draw your character, use adobe once you have money ( To use advantages like onion skin (Being able to view drawings before) as well as lock mechanism ( Being able to lock your drawing into the digital computer so you don't accidentally erase them or connect them with your second layer of drawings) : Use as well a drawing bad.