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Correct the run on sentence. Her car would not start she was late for class

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Identifying a run-on sentence

Run-on sentences occur when multiple independent clauses are combined in a single sentence without the proper punctuation or conjunctions.

⇒ Her car would not start she was late for class.

Here, the two independent clauses are:

  • Her car would not start
  • She was late for class

Correcting run-on sentences

⇒ Her car would not start she was late for class.

There are multiple ways we can approach correcting this sentence.

Using a period

Firstly, we could use a period to separate the clauses:

  • Her car would not start. She was late for class.

Using a semicolon

We could also use a semicolon in the same manner:

  • Her car would not start; she was late for class.

Using a comma and a conjunction

This method makes the most sense for this example, as it poses a "cause-and-effect" scenario.

  • Her car would not start, so she was late for class.

Some other conjunctions include: therefore, and, because

Using a conjunction at the beginning of the sentence

This is similar to the previous rule, but the conjunction is now in a different place. We often have to change the conjunction to make the sentence make sense:

  • Because her car would not start, she was late for class.
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