What is the correct way to write sentence 19? (19) it attempted one shallow takeoff after another each time it banged itself against the glass.

Parag Diwan asked Feb 18, 2023

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Parag Diwan asked Feb 18, 2023

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It attempted one shallow takeoff after another, and each time it banged against the glass.

Capitalized the I in the first word, added a comma, and got rid of the second "itself" since it was redundant.

Robert Mason answered Feb 24, 2023

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