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What is the correct way to write sentence 19? (19) it attempted one shallow takeoff after another each time it banged itself against the glass.

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It attempted one shallow takeoff after another, and each time it banged against the glass.

Capitalized the I in the first word, added a comma, and got rid of the second "itself" since it was redundant.

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