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Negative effect technology has on people essay

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In order to prevent plaigerism, I will only give you some ideas for what to put and fill in. Please make sure to do your own work, and if you cannot find any useful ones just ask!

Introduction:

(1) Hook: Ex. "Have you ever gotten a headache from using a device for too long? If so, you are not alone."

(2)Thesis statement: Ex. "Technology has negative effects on the health, social life, and our enviroment."

(3)Ending that branches the body -> intro

Body paragraph one:

(1) Transition word: ex. "According to ___"

(2) State the main idea of this body paragraph: ex. How technology is detrimental to our health.

(3) Wrap up your idea and connect this body paragraph to the next one

Body paragraph 2:

(1) Transition word: ex. "On that note"

(2) State the main idea of this body paragraph: ex. How technology effects or enviroment

(3) State a source for this information: ex. "___ states that..."

(4) Connect the body paragraph to the next one or the conclusion.

Third body paragraph (optional)

(1) Transition word: ex. "On the other hand..."

(2) State a opposing view: ex. "Technology provides an unlimited source of information for people to use."

(3) Prove against this view with facts and evidence: ex. "While this may be true, information provided by the internet may already be found in libraries."

(4) Transition to the conclusion paragraph

Conclusion paragraph:

(1) Transition word: "All in all..."

(2) Restate your claim/thesis in a new way

(3) Restate all the information you discussed in a summary

(4) Close off with a transition word and a final note: ex. "Technology, while having its benefits, harms much of our community and earth."

Hope this was helpful! Good luck!

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