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Choose the most effective revision for the underlined part of the sentence. If no revision is necessary, choose "Leave it as is."

Bryce delivered a breakfast of toast and eggs that had been buttered as a special gift to his mom.

To his mom, as a special gift, Bryce delivered a breakfast of buttered toast and eggs.
As a special gift, Bryce delivered a breakfast to his mom of buttered toast and eggs.
Bryce delivered a breakfast of buttered toast and eggs to his mom as a special gift.
Leave it as is.

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Bryce delivered a breakfast of buttered toast and eggs to his mom as a special gift.

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