Question

. Rewrite this passage to include vivid imagery, description, and dialogue. Have fun with it!

"We all got in the car to begin our summer road trip. Dad got into the driver's seat. But for some reason, the car wouldn't start."

Answer 1

As me and my family finally headed outside to the car to start out 12 hour road trip, the sun gleamed in our exited faces. One by one we all got in our usual seats just to find out my worst nightmare came true… the car wouldn’t start.

Answer 2

My family and I go in the car to begin our 2022 summer road trip around the United States. While I bring my bag to the car and imagined how much fun we will have, dad got into the driver's seat. When he tried to start the car, the car wouldn't start.