The most important result of Adams's somewhat solitary and unmistakably different childhood was the joy that he found in nature, as evidenced by his taking long walks in the still.wild reaches of the Golden Gate. Nearly every day found him hiking the dunes or meandering along Lobos Creek, down to Baker Beach, or out to the very edge of the American continent.
Ansel was a precocious child who loved nature. He loved collecting bugs and playing near the beach. He did not have many friends in school. Perhaps this was because he was somewhat hyperactive and prone to sickness. He found joy in hiking along the dunes, walking along Lobos Creek to reach Baker Beach, or looking through the
telescope (a hobby he and his father shared),
Compare and contrast the two passages above. Which is easier to follow and why? Which one is more descriptive? Which one gives more information? Which structure gives you more insight into Ansel Adams?