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I wrote this poem, I need advice to finish it. What should I write??

Everything was just a lie
You never cared
All you cared about was getting me high and dry
But I was running out of air
You had to take advantage of me
You're voice, the way its tempting sound
Had me on my knees
Falling to the ground
First time I ripped your t-shirt
The way your eyes search my body, the way they seem to roam
You never knew how much my heart hurt
But you kinda felt like home
The way heat courses through me with the touch of your hand
The way my heart skips a beat
The way we leave our footprints side by side in the sand
Like how you like Scotch on the rocks, neat

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THATS SO GOOD HOW honestly it’s fine how it is
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