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Please help to write a paragraph about your personal experience.

Think about a time when you tried a new activity for the first time. Describe the activity. where were you? What did you do? Please help do that and check your correct grammar, capital letters, punctuation, and spelling please help me.

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The first time I tried a new activity was when I was eight years old and went on a field trip to a skating rink. I was frightened because there were adults skating and going fast, but as time passed, my friends got in and I was left alone because I was afraid of falling and tripping someone. My friend and volunteers assisted me in gaining the bravery to step into the arena; it was frightening, but they took my hand and we skated at a regular pace; it was a lot of fun, even though we stumbled a couple of times; no one was injured, and we enjoyed skating as the chilly wind passed us by and the loud music began to match our movements.
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