Question

In conclusion I think that the world would be a better place after Covid-19. It has affected everyone and made life difficult. There are three reasons how the world can be a better place after Covid-19, indoor non-essential facilities are open, gatherings are allowed during events and masks and face coverings are no longer mandatory.

Do I need to add more details for this part or does it look good?
Do I need to make corrections like proper punctuations and spelling?

Answer 1

It looks great! Punctuation is good, as well as spelling!