Answer: For number 1 there should be a comma after novel and after Twist inside the parentheses. (The novel, "Oliver Twist," was written by Charles Dickens.) For number 2 there should be no apostrophe for "zucchini's". It should be zucchinis or just zucchini (both are plural). For the last one there should be a comma after yard inside the parentheses. ("I don't have anything to put in the yard," Charlotte complied to John.
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