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Is this a good poem?

It comes quick with Nay warning
It’s cold aura oh so haunting
Wilt Thou live it’s hard to say
If Thou argue Thou seal Thy fate
On the cold street haunting Thy dreams
Thou beg Thou plead
But deep down Thou know Thou agree
You’ve done bad things
Thou thought they'd never noticed
Three strikes Thou swing
Thy out of the game
Thou may be cunning
But Thither's Nay point in running
Death Wilt catch up
It is quick
It comes fast
With Nay warning
Thou open the mast
Set sail to the seas
But it catches up
As quickly as can be
Thou panic
Thou cower
Thou gaze in terror
It is ready
To devour
Thou jump
Trying to flee
But it jumps
Swimming after Thou
Why do Thou run
Why do Thou hide
Thou know Thou cannot escape
For death comes quick with Nay warning
Thou swim deeper and deeper
Trying to escape
Death’s cold grasp
But Thou look back
Only to see
Death is not to be seen
Then Thou realize
Then Thou panic
For now Thou know
Thou are dead

User Ravi Kumar Mistry
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17 votes
yes i think it is a great poem good job
User Wrichik Basu
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