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Is my poem good?

The Broken Glass
I crave for the kiss
Not from a person but from an object
A fresh slice on vir.gin skin
A small line That leaves a beatfuil red stain
For I crave the kiss of broken glass
A kiss along my wrist

User Jonas Kohl
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26 votes

Answer:

Beautiful* in line 6. Looks good :)

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