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My vision of a utopia is one that does not include the use of modern technology. A life without technology is different from a life with technology. I have spent weeks without a computer, and I find it to be less stressful than when I have it. Technology, while convenient, can create problems, such as decreased human interaction. It would be ideal to live in a world that was not caught up in smartphones and computers.

Which sentence needs the most revision to be made more specific?

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Answer:

c) A life without technology is different from a life with technology.

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Could you try and elaborate your idea on this sentence: “A life without technology is different from a life with technology?”

Some people may find it as a 1 dollar sentence. Perhaps try and add some more details?

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