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In the story rules of the game the main conflict is Waverly's relationship with her mom. She says, “Standing there, waiting for my punishment, I heard my mother speak in a dry voice. ‘We not concerning this girl. This girl is not concerning for us.’ Nobody looked at me (259). This shows how her mother responded to her. This is important because now she has to decide how to handle her mom moving forward and now they have a huge conflict between them.
a. In the story "Rules of the Game", the main conflict is the main character's relationship with her mother. In teh text, she states, "Standing there, waiting for my punishment, I heard my mother speak in a dry voice. ‘We not concerning this girl. This girl is not concerning for us.’ Nobody looked at me this was found on page 259. This shows her mom get upset. This is important because now she has to deal with her mom being upset and she's not sure of her next move.
b. In the story rules of the game the main conflict is Waverly's relationship with her mother. She says, “Standing there, waiting for my punishment, I heard my mother speak in a dry voice. ‘We not concerning this girl. This girl is not concerning for us.’ Nobody looked at me" (259).... This shows how her mother responded to her by going very cold, not acknowleding her. This is important because now she has to decide how to handle her mom moving forward and now they have a huge conflict between them.
c. In the short story Rules of the Game, the main conflict is Waverly's relationship with mother. She says, “Standing there, waiting for my punishment, I heard my mother speak in a dry voice. ‘We not concerning this girl. This girl is not concerning for us.’ Nobody looked at me (259). " This shows how her mother would not acknowledge her presence and pretended she did not exist. This proves this is the main conflict because it shows bad blood between family.
d. In the short story "Rules of the Game", the main conflict is Waverly's relationship with her mother. In the text, the author writes, “Standing there, waiting for my punishment, I heard my mother speak in a dry voice. ‘We not concerning this girl. This girl is not concerning for us.’ Nobody looked at me" (259). This shows how her mother responded to her after she ran away from home. This is important because now Waverly is being punished for her actions. This proves this is the main conflict because Waverly now has to decide her next move.