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Which revision puts the sentence in the active voice while maintaining the meaning?

At the end of the day, the coyote’s haunting call filled the dusk.
At the end of the day, the coyote’s call haunted and filled the dusk.
At the end of the day, the coyote’s call was haunting the dusk.
At the end of the day, the coyote was calling the haunted dusk.

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The second one because it included more things that the coyote did
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