Question

(20 pts) Hello, can someone just help me check my poem. This is the prompt I chose-

Write a descriptive poem at least six lines long about an experience or emotion. You may use any poetic structure you want, such as free verse; verse with rhyme and meter; or verse with meter and no rhyme. Focus on sensory details. Make sure the poem refers to at least three senses. Your goal is to make the reader see, hear, touch, taste, or smell the thing you are describing.

heres my poem.

Happy snappy turtle.

There once was a turtle,
He seemed kinda slow,
I came up to pat him on the head,
He was indeed wet
as he came out of the water not so long ago,
He was also very green and shy,
as all turtles are,
He seemed very happy
and then I stopped.
And then he was quite snappy.

I know, it sounds kinda bad sorry im just trying to get a good grade and im very bad with poems usually lol.

Answer 1

here let me help you

Step-by-step explanation:

There once was a turtle,

He seemed kinda slow,

I came up to pat him on the head,

He was indeed wet

as he came out of the water not so long ago,

He was also very green and shy,

as all turtles are,

He seemed very happy

and then I stopped.

And then he was quite snappy.