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Write a narrative essay of 200-250 words write A situation

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Narratives are very easy i just did one i will show u as an example but if u do FLVS DONT COPY IT they will know so here is how it should look. if u have any more question lmk! the first part has to be a hook and interesting quote.

Step-by-step explanation:

“Come on y’all will be late for the boat.”

Shouted Lilly’s mom to all the girls, if only they knew what would happen today. As the girls all rushed out the door at once like a stampede. They all were running barefoot to the beach, they felt the sand and warm water between their toes and a breeze on their face.

“Wow, there is not a cloud in sight, what a great day it will be!” Said Fallon.

It is proven by scientists that a friend group with over 2 people can actually make the lives of the people in the friend group much happier and stable in life.

Fallon was the brains of the group, with the most common sense and knew her way around everything even if she had no clue what it was! Ocean was the mom of the group and always made sure they were prepared, had sunscreen, towels and food. Rosetta was always the “booksmart gifted” one; she was not as smart in the head as fallon but, she soaked up school knowledge like a dry sponge in water. Lilly was the “free spirit fashionista” of the group. She was always solving problems and helping everyone out and always started the parties.

“We're finally here!” Said Lilly. They were riding out to sea with the feel of the light breeze. Watching the cool blue waters while sitting on the smooth velvet boat edge.

“Don't fall off the boat,” Ocean yelled. “We won't,” Lilly replied. “Omg look dolphins!” Rosetta shouted. “We have reached our destination,” Ocean giggled.

They all got their diving gear on and headed out. As all the girls went down to dive, Ocean kept having this unsettling feeling but she thought she was just sea-sick.

All the girls came up from diving and dried off Ocean made sandwiches “mm turkey sandwiches are ready!” said Ocean. The girls ate the sandwiches and started fishing, Fallon went to start the boat to move to a better area but it would not crank, and Rosetta started to shake. She never does well with these kinds of situations. Rosetta started to feel dizzy and her vision became foggy. They were all scared for their life, Rosetta even became so frightened she fell and cut herself without thinking she rinsed it off in the salt water which made it hurt worse, she wanted to scream in pain but she knew she could not. The blood that she rinsed off started to attract a shark. They all jumped in the water and tried to see if they could fix the boat, but they failed, they all started to freak out, Rosetta and Lilly even passed out, but not for long.

Fallon and Ocean were still trying to figure out what happened “we are going to die!” Ocean shouted, still feeling uneasy. She would not let anyone know how terrified she was, as she started to sweat and shook.

They could not figure out what happened. They were screaming back and forth at each other so loud it woke Lilly and Rosetta up. They were glad it did, because they saw a shark coming from just a few yards away. They all started to scream and panic as they knew what was going to happen. The shark came and flipped the boat over! They could feel it swimming under their feet.

Ocean shouted “Get on the top of the boat.”

So they did and luckily the shark swam away. After hours of sitting and waiting not being able to do anything stranded it became night their parents reported them missing and several search teams looked for them in the areas they went to or might have gone to. A few miles away they saw something big with lights.

The girls all looked up “what is that” Fallon said. “I think it's a boat!” Ocean, Said with excitement. “We are saved.” Lilly and Rosetta Shouted. They were spotted! The boat picked them up and they were on their way back. Rejoicing and hugging each other. The girls apologized to one another for getting mad so they made a promise to stick together no matter what and always talk things through.

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