Question

1) What is the best explanation of what needs revising in the following sentences?

# 4 Jerry does begin to change at the beginning of the story. The act that truly shows how similar the two brothers are comes near the end of the story. At the very begin
contribute more money to his father's gift fund but is too late. His reaction at the end of the story shows how much he truly cares about his father.
A) The first sentence does not express a complete thought
B) The second sentence is jumbled and unclear
The sentences are choppy and need to be combined
D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

Answer 1

D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

Step-by-step explanation:

I took the test.

Answer 2

Answer: D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

Step-by-step explanation:

I took the test, but here is my explanation. If you look at the very first sentence, and look at the third sentence, you can see that it kind of connects. But it is blocked by the second sentence which throws off its arrangement. I believe that the answer is D.