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Which of the following sentences uses the most precise and vivid word choice?

Katelynn walked down the hall and read her book at the same time.

Katelynn read and walked down the hall at the same time.

As Katelynn tried to walk down the hall, she read a book.

Katelynn meandered down the hall in a zigzag pattern, attempting to read and walk simultaneously.

Katelynn tried to read and walk at the same time.

User Roody
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Katelynn meandered down the hall…..

It gives the most detail
User JDesigns
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“Katelynn meandered…” the description of the way she walks helps give a vivid image. This sentence also gives us the most information about her personality and how she acts in society: zoning everyone out. in her own world reading. not focused on people around her, forcing the zigzag pattern. “meandered” showing how she’s a calm and more innocent person. hope this helped!!
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