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My poem please rate

1. Meeting you was
fate , becoming your friend
was a choice , but falling in lov
with you was our destiny

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7 votes

Answer:

Absolutely great!!

Step-by-step explanation:

Instead of 'with you was our destiny' you could put 'was our destiny' just to make it flow! Otherwise that's really good :)

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