Answer:
1. One might find that the works of Shakespeare are not their favorite reading material. However, if they practice and remain patient, their skills and enjoyment will increase.
- By replacing "you" with "one," and "your" with "their" it changes to 3rd-person point-of-view.
2. Once they conquer Shakespeare, they will be prepared for other great poets, such as Walt Whitman and Emily Dickinson.
- On this sentence we changed the "you" with "they" making this a 3rd-person point-of-view.