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My poem please rate

Now that you are here
I have nothing to fear
With you is where i belong
I know it I feel it so strongly
Nothing has been more clear
That it is your love i hold so dear
Deep inside is the cry in my heart
I never ever want us to part
Doing the best he can
To show you for sure
That my love for you is pure
I will do whatever it takes
I don't care about the stakes
you and only you i want
A prayer I know god will grant

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5 votes

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the rhyme scheme is better than most other poems ive read, but the subject is a bit overdone. Still, its good. 9/10, may or may not paste it in a bio somewhere

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