Answer:
Explanation: Well at (0) you should replace "am" with "is". At (1) you should replace "they" with "it". At (2) you should replace "the" with "an" at (3) you should replace climb with climbing. At (4) you should replace "so" with "but" and at (5) add an "ed" on the end of suspend. At (6) "or" should be replaced with "and". At (7) "my" should be replaced with "I" and at (8) "in" should be replaced with "at".