Question

Which sentence is an example of weak language that should be revised?

The large ship moved toward the small island.
The weary soldiers marched toward the thick smoke.
The hulking tank rolled slowly away from the danger.
The silver plane barreled toward the radio tower.

Answer 1

The large ship moved toward the small island.

Explanation:

The adjectives (large, small) are not strong words to describe things. Use massive instead or large and tiny in replacement of small.