Answer:
At the time when Florence was born, most girls were not given any education. Florence was lucky because her father believed in the value of education for women.
Step-by-step explanation:
In the given statement, the errors are mainly in the verb forms in the sentences. This means that the verbs in the sentences have to be in accordance with the tenses of the sentences or the form of the sentences.
The correct forms will be -
(a) ‘birth’ will be changed to 'born' because the use of the helping verb "was" already shows that it is in the past tense and so the verb will remain in the past participle form.
(b) give will be changed into "given" because 'were not' makes it a past tense thereby requiring the verb 'give' to also be in the past participle form of the verb "given".
(c) The use of the verb "believes" which is in the present tense makes it wrong because the structure of the tense is past tense "was". This means that the verb "believes" will also need to be in the past tense.
(d) The word "educate" is wrongly used in the last part of the sentence. Here, it must be used as a noun. so, 'educate' is a verb that has to be changed to 'education'.
Thus, the correct sentence will be
At the time when Florence was born, most girls were not given any education. Florence was lucky because her father believed in the value of education for women.