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GUYS CAN U GUYS JUST CHECK IF THIS 5 PARAGRAPH NEEDS SOME THINGS LIKE COMMAS OR CHANGING SOME WORDS PLSSSSS.

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Hey I think you forgot to add your PDF of your essay. If you can do it I can take a look at it.
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