Question

CAN YOU JUST CHECK IF THIS PARAGRAPH IS MISSING ANYTHING FOR EXAMPLE I COULD CHANGE SOME WORDS OR AT PUCTATION? plssss

Hey, my name is Muhammed. I have a family of 8, I also have 5 sisters and they are all older than me. Most of us were born in Saudi Arabia but my other sisters were born in Turkey. One of the reasons I am not going to do online school is because I really enjoy playing volleyball and I hope that I would be on a volleyball team in Taft. The languages I speak are English, Turkish, and Arabic. We mostly speak Turkish because that's our main language. When I am around my 20’s I will be a lawyer and when I have enough money to buy apartments, houses, complexes I will work on real estate since I am going to take lawyer classes and real estate classes in university.

Answer 1

it's pretty good, i added small changes.

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Hey, my name is Muhammed. I have a family of 8, I also have 5 sisters, and they are all older than me. Most of us were born in Saudi Arabia, but my other sisters were born in Turkey. One of the reasons I am not going to do online school is because I really enjoy playing volleyball, and I hope that I will be on a volleyball team in Taft. The languages I speak are English, Turkish, and Arabic. We mostly speak Turkish because that is our main language. When I am around my 20's, I will be a lawyer, and when I have enough money to buy apartments, houses, complexes, I will work on real estate since I am going to take lawyer classes and real estate classes at the university.