Question

Please make rough draft of this pre writing of 150 words

When I was at primary school in 2nd grade. I was a very geeky and scrawny socially awkward type person. I had only two friends both of there name was "Austin" but I don't remember their Last names. I was at music class and the who's name I also forgot. Decided last minute to hold a talent show. No one really did anything but a very unintelligent little Luke Oden. Decided to sing the ninjago season 1 theme song. I went up and sang my song. It was terrible and I was bullied for a couple of months after.

Answer 1

I'm so sorry to hear that. I am a teen and I like kid shows and I've been bullied for that but it's best to not let other people get to you. You should do what you like to do and watch what you like to watch and sing what you like to sing.

Answer 2

When I was in Primary school, I was a very geeky, scrawny, socially awkward 2nd grader. I had friends, but only two of them named Austin, and Austin. They shared the same name. It was challenging for me to make any new friends.

When we went to music class one day, the teacher decided to hold a last minute talent show. No one really did anything, except for a boy named Luke Oden, and he sang the opening theme song to Ninjago. I guess he wasn't that bad, and it inspired me to go up and sing as well.

Then it was my turn. I was so awkward that it was terrible, and I was bullied for it for months afterwards. It wasn't my fault, I was just very awkward, is all. The other kids were very mean to me, and I don't understand why kids can be so mean.

I hope this is okay, I tried my best :)