Question

I wrote another song since y'all liked the last one. Enjoy!

Try to trust the system

But it's breaking down

Hear the screams? Resist em'

Cause there's no savior now


All we ever wanted 

Was a chance to become more

Now we're being hunted 

Right at our front door


Because there is no savior 

That much we all know

On our best behavior 

But it's time to go


Be the leader for the people 

A symbol of hope and love and pain

Hide up by the steeple 

And I'll meet you by the train


Because there is no savior 

That much we all know

On our best behavior 

But it's time to go


Drag our bodies through the mud

Take away and break our names

Catch us and you'll shed our blood

You've been twisted into your own games

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Answer 1

I love the song! Keep it up!

1. It has a steady rhythm

2. The words go very well together

Answer 2

Nice i like your song friend;)