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Oh No!!!! You were trying to get to Blaarchus III, but you ran into an asteroid field that damaged your space ship and you had to crash land on this uncharted planet. Luckily for you, there is an oxygen atmosphere and you don’t have to walk around in your space suit. You put on some normal clothes and step out of your jacked up ship. You look around but don’t see anything except for a road. The road is literally right outside of your spaceship door. The road going left is painted yellow. The road going right is purple. You think it’s weird that there is this two painted road right outside the door, but you can’t just stay where you are. You feel confident one of these roads will take you to some people that can help. But which way should you go? You take a deep breath and head.....

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You should have some geysers go off and then gas fill the air and you turn around to go back into your spaceship-but it's gone and where it once was is a hole in the ground. So you leap into action, running as fast as you can trying to get away from the road, but a murky mist fills the air and your lungs feel like they are disintegrating as your minds starts getting foggy from being out of breath until you trip and find yourself at the edge of a very steep canyon. In the canyon you see lots of dark holes with jagged edges so you look a little closer and fall over the edge of the cliff. You tumble down and when you finally come to a stop, your vision becomes more clear and your coughing up blood, but the air feels clearer. By now, you are covered in scratches and notice that you have a giant purple spot forming on your rib cage. You recognize this injury as a cracked rib since you had to take a health and first aid class before your journey beyond the of our solar system. You pull up your pantleg to look down at the wide, open gash that has sliced your calf open. In it you see what looks like a piece of metal from earth. You take off your belt and bite on it as hard as you can as you yank the metal out of your leg with your now grimy fingers, screaming at the spasms of pain that it sent through your system. The piece of metal is slightly larger than your hand and covered in your blood. You look more closely at it and see a familiar figure- just a little darker than your blood. You wipe the metal off onto your shirt until you realize that it was a symbol that you had been staring at for the last 7 years every night before bed. It was the NASA logo! You rip the bottom of your shirt and break a long, hard, white, very textured membranous looking stick in half to bind your leg, just in case. You use the other half of the stick as a cane as you tuck the rest of your shirt into your slightly-oversized pants. You begin to trudge along the narrow pathway until you come to a halt right in front of a giant, gaping hole on the side of the canyon. You venture further inside, daring to take a few steps into it. It looked like a deep, yawning abyss, like the one that swallowed you whole all those years ago- when your actual purpose of this "mission" was to help build a space station on the planet Titan. They wondered why they weren't getting a signal when the first astronauts "arrived". Well, the thing that took you probably took them too. Just when you thought you were finally going to meet land again and get to enjoy walking on dirt-or some form of it, the atmosphere's atoms aligned and sent you ricocheting off of some invisible force, only to send you and your then-alive crewmates spiraling into a what you guess is the multiverse. Oh, how you would kill to see one of Marvels superheroes come to you and take you back to Mars, your 2nd home, even if it could never beat the way earth used to have such beauty and livable conditions. You wondered about Mars and the people of earth who could now call the human race Martians and say that their home was Mars. Now that Mars was also becoming a new Venus, along with Earth and the population of humans began to decline, my job became more stressful and the severity of the situation only grew. Mars has only ever been a temporary option of habitancy since the Mars rover Perseverance found traces of permanent toxins in the air, much like pollution, but far more serious.

Sorry, gotta have dinner- I had fun writing this, enjoy!!!

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I head down The yellow path in search for any signs of civilization, I wonder if my compass works so I pull it out but its constantly spinning counter-clockwise. "weird" I say. I continue down this path for what feels like days but when I check my Earth time watch its only been an hour now and its 5pm. I have my personal assistance droid scan the road for any prints of anything because its getting dark on this planet and Im becoming desperate. The droid scans for prints but finds nothing. I keep walking and just as its about to get dark I see a forest of dark brown trees with grayish pink leaves. I start running towards it until I get to it and it has a sign that says "heidn aksfd jvigbe idhgdvd jbjkgn rtuy hfgdjgu hwfd <--->" I have my droid try to scan it to translate it, My droid then says in a calming voice "Translating" then in a scary sacred deep voice "Turn Back Now..." I then feel chills go down my back. I say "Alright then" I go to turn around and the Yellow road is now purple. I start to panic and run down through the forest. I hear heaving Logs being crushed in a stomping pattern behind me. As Im running I hear something above Me jumping from Branch to Branch. I reach a Rock Wall and turn around and a large 9ft tall creature with slender legs and arms is right there. It was mostly picked to the bone with flesh hanging from its skeleton. It had The skull of a deer with large antlers but it had fangs and saliva with blood dripping from its mouth. It then lunges at me and I wake up from a nightmare sweating. I walk over to the controls of my ship and sit down and Pilot my way back to Blaarchus III with the samples of That mysterious planets moon... THE END. Tell me what you think?

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