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Which underlined section of the following sentence should be revised to improve the parallel structure?

(1)After the championship football game finished, the crowds (2) flooded the field, (3)raised the coach in the air, and (4)to celebrate, they let balloons go into the sky.


section 1
section 2
section 3
section 4

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section 2. The information is unnecessary
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