Question

Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

A. We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.
B. We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.
C. We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.
D. We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.

Answer 1

C

Step-by-step explanation:

"We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there" could refer to any location, and there are fewer relevant details in this than any other.

Option A refers to a forest,

Option B refers to a gym,

Option D refers to a track.

Yet option C refers to no placement/location.

Answer 2

The sentence that most needs to be revised because its description is too vague is: "C. We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there." This sentence could be revised to include more specific details about the location and the number of flights of stairs.