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Read the following excerpt from Pointed Roofs by Dorothy Richardson. Then, respond to the question that follows.

Walking along a narrow muddy causeway by a little river overhung with willows, girls ahead of her in single file and girls in single file behind, Miriam drearily recognised that it was June. The month of roses, she thought, and looked out across the flat green fields. It was not easy to walk along the slippery pathway. On one side was the little grey river, on the other long wet grass repelling and depressing. Not far ahead was the roadway which led, she supposed to the farm where they were to drink new milk. She would have to walk with someone when they came to the road, and talk. She wondered whether this early morning walk would come, now, every day. Her heart sank at the thought. It had been too hot during the last few days for any going out at midday, and she had hoped that the strolling in the garden, sitting about under the chestnut tree and in the little wooden garden room off the saal had taken the place of walks for the summer.
She had got up reluctantly, at the surprise of the very early gonging. Mademoiselle had guessed it would be a "milk-walk." Pausing in the bright light of the top landing as Mademoiselle ran downstairs she had seen through the landing window the deep peak of a distant gable casting an unfamiliar shadow—a shadow sloping the wrong way, a morning shadow. She remembered the first time, the only time, she had noticed such a shadow—getting up very early one morning while Harriett and all the household were still asleep—and how she had stopped dressing and gazed at it as it stood there cool and quiet and alone across the mellow face of a neighbouring stone porch—had suddenly been glad that she was alone and had wondered why that shadowed porch-peak was more beautiful than all the summer things she knew and felt at that moment that nothing could touch or trouble her again.
She could not find anything of that feeling in the early day outside Hanover. She was hemmed in, and the fields were so sad she could not bear to look at them. The sun had disappeared since they came out. The sky was grey and low and it seemed warmer already than it had been in the midday sun during the last few days.

In a well-written paragraph of 5–7 sentences, explain how the author uses stream of consciousness and one other narrative technique to enhance her writing. Be sure to include specific textual evidence to support the narrative techniques you discuss in your response.

Answer 1

The author enhances his writing by employing stream of consciousness and descriptive imagery. We learn about the protagonist's thoughts and perceptions through stream of consciousness. The protagonist's melancholy mood is evoked by phrases like "long wet grass repelling and depressing" and "grey and low" sky, as well as the vivid descriptions of the muddy causeway, overhanging willows, and flat green fields. Readers are able to immerse themselves in the character's perspective and feelings thanks to these narrative techniques, making the writing more engaging and relatable.

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Answer 2

Answer:the author employs stream of consciousness and descriptive imagery to enhance his writing. through stream of consciousness, we gain insights into the protagonist's thoughts and perceptions. the description of the muddy causeway, overhanging willows, and flat green fields creates a vivid picture of the environment, while phrases like "long wet grass repelling and depressing" and "grey and low" sky evoke the protagonist's melancholic mood. these narrative techniques allow readers to immerse themselves in the character's perspective and emotions, making the writing more engaging and relatable.

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